Enough light to see the path; enough courage to take the step; enough sense to enjoy the walk; enough company to share the time.

Tuesday, April 3, 2012

April Fool (a "haiku" cycle): III



April's on the edge
of laughter, tears, and singing—
any moment now.


Sky so blue it dives
deep into your chest, expands,
leaves shimmer behind.
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  1. UnknownApril 3, 2012 at 3:17 PM

    The second stanza is beautifully arranged. The tempo has great metrical feet. I especially loved the closing. Such a beautiful musing, this time of year.

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    1. K M BreidenthalApril 3, 2012 at 7:14 PM

      Thank you for such a close reading, Beverly. Your thoughtful, specific comment is helpful and very encouraging!

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